Consumption (a poem)You consumed me Every thought, dream, desire Like fuel to an already raging fire The idea of you inspiried me To want to weave words into verses That could never begin to describe the feelings I hide The nouns and verbs cant paint a picture of my mind when your inside You were like drops of honey on a bitter tongue And yet the alcohol to a wound You were the melody to my heart song, but you didnt sing-a-long You were like water to my barren naive desert Sprouting flowers of self enlightenment And opening my eyes to the other side And though you arent as constant in my mind The memory, so strong, remains the same You consumed me I've beened devoured Holding my breath for so long I've turned blue And wondering what are the chances that I've consumed you Submitted by DUB (63 posts) on July 9, 2009 - 10:23am. |
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"You were like drops of
"You were like drops of honey on a bitter tongue/ And yet the alcohol to a wound"
Nice line. Alcohol stings unlike the sweetness of honey...yet the alcohol still purifies and cleanses us. I like that.
Very lovely. You should
Very lovely.
You should keep them coming.
thanks