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The Return of Carmen

Go easy on me... it's been awhile since I've done this... I used to write a lot of Frankie/Bianca/Lena/Maggie AMC fan fic a long time ago... I just had this idea about how Carmen will be re-introduce to the LWord

 Another restless morning filled of just sex with no strings, Shane awakes to a stranger in the bed, she barely remembers the woman's name except that she was "pretty good" in bed. By Shane's standards at least. 

 Woman: Good morning handsome. 

 Shane: (growls) morning doesn't start until after my coffee. 

Woman: Can I get you some?

Shane: (turns over and ignores the woman)

Woman: (rubs her back) Last was... amazing...

Shane: mmm. (hears her cell beep and picks it up) 

INCOMING TEXT: Che Pasa Vanilla? r u awake (From Papi)

Shane: Papi? I am now. (ignores the text and tosses her phone to the ground)

Woman: Girlfriend? Ex girlfriend?

Shane: (gets out of bed shirtless and throws on a beater) No. Umm.

Woman: I get it, (gets out of bed and puts on her clothes)

Shane: I had a good it's just...

Woman: Just a one night thing. I get it. You can be a little more direct.

Shane: You're right.

Woman: (sees herself to the door)

(cell phone rings)

Shane: Dammit Papi (looks and sees its Alice and picks up) 

Shane: Hello?

Alice: Hey Shane, you would not believe who just text me!

Shane: (goes into the kitchen and fixes some coffee) Papi? 

Alice: Did she text you too?

Shane: Mm hmm.

Alice: Well...I'll be. I thought I would be the only one she would want to reach out to. But anyways she wants to meet at the planet for lunch. 

Shane: Ok. I guess I can swing by.

Alice: Guess? Come on Shane! She suddenly just dropped off the face of the earth! Aren't you curious about what she's been up to?!

Shane: Not really.

Alice: I'm expecting you to be there.

Shane: Like I said, I guess I will. But don't count on it.

Alice: Did you have a bad lay last night?

Shane: Alice! come on now.

Alice: Hmm was she virgin?

Shane: Alice...

Alice: Ok..Ok... just do whatever you need to do but be at the planet at 2pm. (hangs up)

Shane: Alice? Alice? ALICE? (puts the phone down)

Jenny: (stands by the door way) Alice called me to. I think we should go.

Shane: I really have no interest in going, I need some alone time to think.

Jenny: You know... you been moody...even by your standards. What's wrong Shane.

Shane: I haven't been sleepy well. I need to go back to bed.

Jenny: I heard...well. We know what I heard last night. It sounded like you had a good time.

Shane: It's just sex, there's no emotion (sits down and slowly sips her coffee)

Jenny: Since when have you been all about emotion?

Shane: It's complicated.

Jenny: (sits next to shane) I'm sure we can all agree I'm the queen of complication.

Shane: (slightly grins) Ok... this whole marriage thing in california its got me thinking of... (pauses)

Jenny: Carmen?

Shane: (sighs) yeah. I mean I know there's ways to reach her, but it was made clear by her cousins she wants nothing to do with me.

Jenny: And who can blame her right? You left her at the alter, and now... what has it been? two years. Is the guilt finally hitting you?

Shane: Let's just say it's been suppressed.

Jenny: This has nothing to do with hanging out with friends. Let's just go out and see Papi. It wouldn't be the same without you there.

Shane: Ok.

Jenny: I'll leave you with your thoughts. (stands up)

Shane: Hey...Jenny

Jenny: (turns) Yes?

Shane: Thanks... you know... for hearing me out.

Jenny: (smiles and walks away)

At the planet

Kit: Papi! Girl! where have you been?!

Papi: Hey beautiful (hands her a rose) I've missed you. I had some family stuff to take care of.

Kit: All is good now? You back to stay.

Papi: For the moment.

Kit: I got a special table just reserved for my favorite girl.

Papi: Your favorite huh? So what happen between us? You know.

Kit: Oh Papi, that was... (takes her hand) something I will always look back on and be thankful of how understand you were.

Papi: If Papi can't understand than who can right?

Kit: That whole "Papi" bit. I really missed you (hugs her)

Papi: (hugs back and sees Alice and Tasha) T! Alicia! 

Kit: Let me go check on lunch. (goes into the kitchen)

Tasha: I'm so pissed at you. (grabs and gives her a hug)

Papi: I know! I know! But look at you two.

Alice: Where the hell have you been?

Papi: I promise I will explain everything... but first how are things with you two?

Alice: My show has been doing well.

Tasha: I been discharge. And taking things easy.

Papi: I saw you show, it was great you are finally making your dreams come true.

(they all sit down)

Alice: Shane and Jenny should be coming.

Papi: Bette and Tina?

(Kit brings in the drinks)

Kit: They went on a family vacation but they will be back next week. Are you still going to be in town?

Papi: (shrugs) depends.

Tasha: Depends? Depends on what?

Papi: On her.

Kit: Her? (sits down) Shane and Jenny better hurry their asses up. 

Tasha: You got another love bug bite.

Papi: This one. Is for reals.

Alice: Did you bring her?

Papi: She should be coming soon.

(Shane and Jenny walk in)

Papi: Yo Vanilla!

Shane: (nods and pulls up the chair in the corner) Hey Pops.

Jenny: It's good to see you Papi.

Papi: I guess everyone is here huh?

Jenny: What's the news? Did we miss it.

Alice: Apparently she's met someone.

Tasha: Alice, let Papi tell her story.

Papi: It's a family friend of mine, I mean we went to the same highschool and she was very much in the closet.

Alice: Did you guys reconnect on ourchart?

Papi: You and your chart. No. I saw her in a club one night and we just decided to hang out more.

Alice: Just hang out?

Papi: Getting into her pants wasn't my intention chica. Right Shane? You know how draining that can be. 

Shane: Yep (nods)

Tasha: Do I know her?

Papi: I think her family moved away when we hooked up.

Tasha: Let's not go there. (laughs) 

Jenny: I'm really happy for you by why no contact?

Tasha: Yeah, I must of texted your ass a thousand times.

Alice: And I sent you several emails.

Kit: I tried calling. A lot.

Papi: (looks at Shane)

Shane: I didn't reach out, Wax got burnt down and I had some issues.

Papi: Sorry to hear that.

Shane: (looks pass Papi's shoulder) It can't be. (whispers) 

(Flashes back to Max's Transprom fundraiser)

Carmen: So there was this girl Eva Torres. And we decided to go to this porn festival and that's where she taught me how to 69.

(Echos in shane's head) - Eva Torres - Eva Torres 

Alice: Shane? What's wrong... (sees Carmen) Oh. My. God.

(flashes back on the beach)

Tasha: It's only going to be six months. You still coming to my party? 

Alice: Who the hell is Eva Torres?

Tasha: That's just Papi.

(flash back fades)

Papi: (turns around) Everyone I would like to introduce, well you need no introduction right? Carmen, my finacee.

To Be continued 

 

 

 


exscar's picture

"gurrrrl"

"Kit: Papi! Girl! where have you been?! " 

HAHAHAHA rflmao

and I can totally imagine papi saying que pasa vanilla in a text message

interesting fanfic...if only :p

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Gaelle9's picture

!!

I've missed your writting MadeInSF!!

Not sure about Carmen and Papi tho.. that's too much heat!

MadeInSF's picture

Gaelle!!! muahhhh!!! I've

Gaelle!!! muahhhh!!! I've just missed you ;) DHT lets see if I can continue

 

Alice: Carmen you and Papi?

Carmen: *hugs everyone and gives Shane an icy stare* Yes Alice... we reconnected at a family gathering.

Papi: I was just bartending... she came up to me... and I remembered... she looked a little blue... so you know Papi can't see any woman sad... I know what to do *puts her arms around her* ain't that right mami?

Shane: *swallows the lump in her throat* so when's the big day?

Papi: Next week...

Carmen: We would of told you all sooner but I wanted to wait out?

Shane: Is this your idea of a joke? Wait out?

Alice: Now Shane...

Carmen: I can handle this Alice *pulls papi's arms off of her* a joke...a joke? what you did was a joke... a cruel one... here... *takes papi's hand* it's true love... not a joke.

Papi: *shyly grins* We want to have the reception here.

Kit: Well... I ... umm.... sure. Whatever you two want.

Shane: I'm out of here. *walks off*

Alice: Shane! Wait.

Tasha: Let her go Alice... she needs to be by herself. *moves closer to Papi* you really shouldn't of done that.

Papi: Done what?

Tasha: Don't act all innocent. Coming here like this.

Carmen: Don't blame her, it was my idea. *looks and watches Shane across the street*

Tasha: We got some catching up to do...

Papi: I agree. I'm gonna go kick with Tasha for a bit.

Alice: Perfect! In the meantime we can catch up Carmen.

Carmen: *nods still looking across the street*

*tasha and papi go to their old hang out by the basketball courts*

Jenny: This all seems kind of sudden. You just wouldn't believe what Shane said earlier this morning.

Carmen: Shane? She said something?

Jenny: I just find it funny, she regretted what she did to you. And here you just turned up.

Carmen: Sooner or later... I was bound to come back.

Alice: But with Papi?

Carmen: I can't resist Papi's charm... she treats me good. I know we are suppose to hang out but I should ... umm....

Alice: Go find shane?

Carmen: I just need to settle everything once and for all.

Jenny: You should get closure before you get married.

Alice: If you get married...

Carmen: Why you so cynical Alice...

Alice: Remember uhaul lesbians? Now we got the uhaul marriage snydrome.

*carmen shakes her head and goes looking for Shane*

*Thinking to herself - Where can Shane be*

Carmen looks for her everywhere... all the spots they shared... Shane was nowhere to be found. She even went back to the house where the door was unlocked and walk in the garage where her turntable set was still there. Carmen slowly moved up the knobs and remembered the time Shane and her had sex the first time.

*Thinking to herself - I got to find her*


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