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Girltrash! Fanfic - Reasons Why Not (Daisy/Tyler)

Hey. *waves* I wrote a Girltrash! fanfic (Daisy/Tyler pairing, Daisy POV), which you can find at http://chilipeppasbaby.livejournal.com/66570.html. I was pretty proud of myself, seeing as it's the first fanfic I've finished in a number of years. Usually I have to work and slave to be able to finish any piece of writing. But this time... it was kind of freaky how Daisy's girltrashy thoughts just poured out of my head and onto the computer.

I would really appreciate some constructive criticism, seeing as concrit is the only way for a writer to improve.


Suhrr's picture

I don't have concrit to

I don't have concrit to write, as I'm too busy being fan-girlish. I thought the piece was excellent - you really got into Daisy's head with a nice and long analysis, even though you only have a few minutes of scenes between Tyler and Daisy to work off of. I liked the non-canonical stuff like the meeting of Tyler's mum, and the first time Tyler killed. It really brought on a sense of Daisy having intimate knowledge of the inner workings of Tyler's life. Great job! Hopefully, the more Girltrash! is aired, the more you will write.
lovecatcadillac's picture

*beams hugely, her confidence restored*

Thank you so much! Not only for your lovely review (which has me grinning from ear to ear), but for the fact that you took the time to read and review. I haven’t gotten any other feedback (except from my lovely beta-reader), and I was terrified that the reason nobody had said anything about it was that it sucked beyond all reason.

I’m so glad that you enjoyed the non-canonical stuff, as it was extremely fun to try and devise. I wanted to bring Tyler’s mother into the story somehow after Tyler quoted her in Episode 6, and I also wanted to try and figure out some of the motivation for Tyler and Daisy’s "New Year’s reservation" to stop killing people. That’s something that I’ve missed about writing fanfiction- trying to flesh out histories for the characters by expanding on the little offhand references that they make to previous happenings in their lives.

Thanks again, a million times, for restoring my confidence. You have really made my day. :)


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