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"In Plain Sight" is a little too plain

I’m frustrated and I blame it on Mary McCormack.

No, not that kind of frustration, although McCormack certainly could provoke it. I’m talking about the feeling that comes when a highly anticipated show falls short, as is the case with USA’s In Plain Sight.

In Plain Sight, which was called Mary Sunshine when first announced, stars McCormack as Mary Shannon, a U.S. Marshal who relocates and protects people in the witness protection program. Mary is a strong, independent woman who is good at her job and is treated as an equal by other officers, including her quirky partner, Marshall (Fred Weller). Marshal Marshall, heh!

Sounds like a great premise, right? Early reviews suggested that In Plain Sight would serve as the female equivalent to another successful USA series, Burn Notice. I even read a comparison to the much-lamented Karen Sisco. Plus, the fab Lesley Ann Warren plays Mary’s mom, Jinx. Cool.

The series seemed to have a lot going for it. Guest stars so far have included Dave Foley, Sherry Stringfield and Jane Adams. The episode titles are very punny: “Hoosier Daddy,” “Trojan Horst,” “Who Shot Jay Arnstein.” The show has pop culture references galore — a mob informant named Frankie Nuts, tuna casserole with Velveeta and a potato chip crust, and Columbo, Sex and the City and Showgirls allusions. Dang, I want to like this show.

But I don’t. As seems to be en vogue for strong TV women, Mary’s personal life is a mess. For one thing, she’s not very nice — OK, she’s a bitch. She’s always in a bad mood and treats Marshall like a lackey. Mary’s mom is a flake and her sister, Brandy (Nicole Hiltz), is a crook. Her ballplayer boyfriend Raphael (Cristian de la Fuente) is, for no reason I can see, crazy about her, but she seems to have no real interest in him outside the bedroom.

If Mary’s home life served the story, I could forgive the cliché. But it adds nothing. And despite the built-in tension of protecting federal witnesses, the plot lines are just sort of blah. The writing doesn’t live up to the show’s promise. And that’s frustrating. So why blame Mary McCormack? Because she won me over in The West Wing and I want to see more of her. Because she deserves a breakout role. And because she looks so good in a tank top.

Have you watched In Plain Sight? What do you think? Does the show deserve a chance to get better?

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  • Angela's picture

    I Think

    I think that each episode is hit or miss. Last nights show was pretty good but the one before it I didnt even get through. I do think that it deserves a chance to get better. I'll keep tuning in, but if I make it through a whole epiode, that is another story.

    FreewheelNat's picture

    Agree on Mary

    She sure does look good in a tank top ;-)

    We don't have the show over here in the UK so can't comment on it, can only agree with you on Mary

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    tellofilms 's picture

    Couldn't get past the pilot

    I'm with you- I had such high hopes for this series and I was very excited that a strong female lead was on TV again. And witness protection- we haven't really seen that yet- seemed interesting.

    I wish the show had been more like the Law and Order series in which you rarely know about the personal life of the characters and each glimps makes it more of a voyeur type of experience. But these writers decided to throw up all the personal information in the first episode. I was too upset to try and watch it again for fear of being dissappointed.

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    SusanSusanSusan's picture

    I Like It

    I don't usually go for cop/law/family dramas, but, I've been watching this show and, while I do agree that there's room for improvement, I do actually like it.  Go figure. 
    Elizabeth's picture

    I also couldn't get past the

    I also couldn't get past the pilot. I taped the first episode and didn't realize the episode went beyond an hour, but when I sat down to watch it, I didn't really care enough about the show to try and catch the ending. I wanted to like it, but just felt that they were trying too hard to make the show edgy and cool. I am just waiting for my other two favorite investigative summer shows to come back, The Closer and Psych.
    Sarah from Chicago's picture

    I must be the exception

    I must be the exception here, I actually REALLY like this show. Seriously.

    It's one of the few shows that I actually make time to watch. Sure, it's not always shakepeare, but then, what is? But on the whole (actually, last night was the only episode that kinda dragged for me so far) it's been really excellent.

    I really like how flawed and difficult-to-like she is. She's a bitch, yup, but then, so am I. And honestly, I'm kinda enjoying having a woman there that doesn't apologise for being aggressive and assertive, and taking guys on, on their own terms. Do I always like what she says or does? Nope, but that's not the point of the show for me.

    And yeah, so maybe her boyfriend is just there for her to have sex with; awesome in my book. I like the juxtaposition in their roles, where he is the emotional and softer one, and she is the hard-arsed unemotional one. She doesn't show emotion around people hardly at all, so it's entirely consistent with the character. 

    I was really surprised when I saw the title of this post, because at first I thought I read it wrong. But then I can't stand Lesley Ann Warren, or her character, so maybe our tastes are a tad different.

    But then, I don't get how people can watch Tila Tequila *shrug* so go figure ... 

    Sarah 

     

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    heidi.'s picture

    me too

    i agree with you...i really enjoy this show! i don't stay up so late on a "school night" to watch it but it is on my dvr list. i watch it every monday! my girlfriend and i both enjoy it...we like that mary isn't nice! we dig her attitude and sarcasm...i could do without the sister or mom though!
    RedBeet's picture

    hotness!

    I absolutely love the show! It's definitely not as intelligent as West Wing, but Mary's hot in a tank top AND as a "bitch" - she's a tough cookie, but sweet at heart.  There's been some significant character dev - with the boyfriend, marshall getting shot, mary and mom re: absentee dad; not to mention the drama with the witnesses.

    I'm going to keep watching.  yummy.

    Also - for the longest time I thought Mary was Maria Bello.  Anyone else get confused? those two are twins!

    the linster's picture

    Glad you posted

    I'm glad to know the show has its fans. I tried to love it. Really. Don't put me in the Tila Tequila category, though!
    swack's picture

    Mary McCormack


    I agree that she will make me watch no matter what. She's a great actress and Mary Shannon is a great character. What can I say. I like my TV women tough and mean but with a heart of gold.
     
    But I also agree that there seems to be something lacking for this character. In the first few episodes she just didn't care about anything. It was hard to root for her because I wasn't sure what I was rooting for. But it seems like that is starting to change a little bit. This week we saw some of what motivates Mary, the stuff with her dad, etc.
     
    You know what I wish there was more of on this show? Girls. Maybe even a lady boss. This show gives me nothing to work with on subtext. Oh well. Can't have everything. Sometimes looking hot in a tank top and having interesting "case of the week" stories has to be enough. It's better than 90% of the other new shows, so I'll keep watching every week. 
    Penny Winterr's picture

    Formulaic

    It's too formulaic.  And not in the good "Oh, it's another pint of Ben & Jerry's [your fave here] nice and comforting ice cream" but the oh-so-predictable-with-not-much-else-to-offer kind of formulaic.

    While I do think Mary is HOT, and since there's NO Ladycops aspect to the show, I couldn't get past the first eppie.

    gingersmomspike's picture

    still don't know.......

    Why isn't this show in the 9:00 time slot. It has less violence then Law and Order which is one of my favorite shows. I don't think Mary is tough enough and there is too much comedy in it. Why did the young BBall player faint when he got roughed up a bit? Looked like he was just slapped! That is when I turned it off. Maybe I missed the best part but I doubt it! Give me Angie Dickinson "Police Woman" or Cagney and Lacey anyday over this show!

    coffcaffcola's picture

    trailblazers often catch flak ...

    ... from those they're blazing the trail for. :(

    what's wrong with showing men in more helpless roles? if a woman was shown fainting when slapped, no one would bat an eyelash. but when a big strong man falls when he's slapped *gasp*, suddenly it's cause to stop tuning in?

    c'mon now. isn't there enough sexist double standard in the world?

    i agree with several of the above reviewers that I LIKE this show. i LIKE Mary McCormack's hard-ass-with-a-heart-of-gold character Mary Shannon. i LIKE that he's more invested emotionally in the relationship than she is. i LIKE that she uses him for sex from time to time. i LIKE that she "treats Marshall like a lackey" (actually, she doesn't. she loves him like a younger brother. she's smarter and more mature, and she knows it.) i LIKE that macho hetero guys are shown liking ballroom dancing; disliking fighting; and perenially pining after tough women. and i LIKE that the main character is grouchy and unsentimental and tough and principled. an ultra-competent straight-shooting woman. good for her. that's what i want to see more of in the real world.

    god knows we get tons & tons of cottony soft, sugary sweet, morally-gooey, only-good-for-sex, eye-rollingly incompetent female characters thrown at us to last us 10 lifetimes. each.

    how many tough female characters are there on broadcast TV like Mary McCormack's character?

    how many female characters LEAD a TV drama by herself, period?

    although many women don't want to think about it in this ostensibly advanced day & age, the scarcity of woman-led TV dramas since TV was invented = any woman-led TV drama is still Blazing A New Trail.

    keeping an open mind is the least we can do.

    ever since i saw Mary McCormack paired with Minnie Driver in the 2001 film "High Heels and Low Lifes" (Robin Hood via Thelma & Louise), i was a fan of both.

    ... when i saw this blog, i thought the writer witnessed something sexist or homophobic or racist in "In Plain Sight". nope. McCormack (the actress) is blamed for being ... 'not likeable enough.' wow. [not a peep about the flaws in all the male-led CSI, Law & Order, etc. shows -- too extreme, too violent, too gory, too nihilistic, to name a few flaws.]  but, when a woman as smart & talented as McCormack manages to help get a woman-led show onto the crowded airwaves (what? the audience sees things from HER point of view? what a concept!), rather than clap our hands or at least hold our tongues, we sniff our noses and turn our backs. ...

    i guess some women think 4 or 5 female-led tv dramas out of dozens & dozens & dozens male-led tv dramas, are simply too many. then by all means, keep eating your own, while i go to usa's website and watch a woman save some lives, and unapologetically kick some ass.

    give her some space, and some benefit of the doubt, will ya.


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    Sarah from Chicago's picture

    *nods*

    Can I just say how much I agree with your post, you said a lot of the same things I said above, but then went further with them ... well done! :)

    I remember when 'Law & Order: Trial By Jury' first came out, and ALL the major roles were held by women, some of whom were seriously NOT NICE. I really enjoyed that too. Course, we all know what happened to that show.

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    Chantal's picture

    I wholeheartedly agree

    Jeez, what is it with this whole 'bashing' of the show?

    While reading this blog all I could think of was "Is she watching the same thing as I am?" 

    She doesn't treat Marshall like a lackey, she cares deeply for him it is just the way their relationship is and Marshall doesn't seem to have a problem with it and the only thing he wanted was some 'him' moments instead of only 'her' moment. They adressed it, they agreed and voila. 

    As for the whole 'homelife' thing, a lot of women are better at handling their jobs then handling their homelife. Sure the mom and sister may need a little work, but give it a rest, we're only a few episodes in!

    And hello! A women-led show! We need more of that!

     

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    shortypants's picture

    I Agree>>

     

    I agree with every word you wrote.

    Well said.

    I freakin' LOVE this show!

    the linster's picture

    Don't get me wrong...

    I'm certainly all for women-led dramas - we need all we can get. I just want great women-led dramas and I couldn't get into this one.

    Just to clarify - I didn't say that McCormack isn't likeable. I was talking about her character, Mary. I tried to love her because I do love McCormack. I just don't find a reason to be on her side.

    uncagedbird's picture

    i've tried desperately

    to like it.  I really have.  Mostly because she is a strong woman character on TV and we need those.  That and there is totally the tanktop thing.

    However, I'm with you.  I have problems with it.  And especially after this week's episode.  It's going the way of Saving Grace, where all the personality quirks that I would love to see fleshed out are being pissed away early on (in Saving Grace, by the whole thing with the priest - didn't want to spoil for those who haven't seen last season's ending).  I'll keep trying, but like Angela said, I may not make it through the complete episodes.

    Eyecandy is eyecandy afterall.

    BioRocks's picture

    I like the show, though

    I like the show, though there are some episodes that are not that great. I like Mary and her grouchy ways. I like Marshal how he would spout out the most unsuspecting things like philosophy, psychology, or medical knowledge. 

    The mother and the sister I could do without, or it would be better if they had different personalities 

    Sarah's picture

    Don't blame Mary - blame USA

    Don't blame Mary - blame USA Network; their shows have a way of being pretty good but not good enough. I cannot put it into words but it seems to me that while the USA original series have good combinations of drama and comedy, they are not quite edgy enough to be taken seriously.

    Mary McCormack is a good actress, there is no doubt there. I saw her in Boeing-Boeing on Broadway a little over a week ago (with an AE favorite Gina Gershon) and she was INCREDIBLE. She definitely deserved that Tony nom. I urge everyone to go see her play a feisty German flight attendant (with lesbian tendencies I might add.) 

    the linster's picture

    Agreed

    I don't fault McCormack with the show's mediocrity. And I actually think that the premise is great. Maybe I just expected too much.
    jennifer from pittsburgh's picture

    I have to give In Plain

    I have to give In Plain Sight a little bit of slack because the show has promise, but definitely needs to find its voice. I actually like McC's character, even if she is, you know, on the glittery end of the swizzle stick. I do kind of wish they'd kill off Marshall, just because, but I can live with him.
    Zuri's picture

    Mary Mary....

    I can def relate.... I was a little disappointed when the show aired, it certainly didn't help that they kept showing the same episode over and over one day either. I don't think many folks will TiVo this plain show, Burn Notice is so much better. 

    XOXO Zuri 

    llyfrgell's picture

    Boeing Boeing?

    Want a breakout role for Mary McCormack?  How about her Tony-nominated performance in Boeing Boeing on Broadway?  Saw the show on Saturday night and she was BRILLIANT.  I had no idea from her West Wing role that she had comedic timing and stage presence like that, let alone the ability to pull off physical comedy.  I'd love to see her in more theatre productions, especially since I keep forgetting to watch In Plain Sight.  Sounds like I might not be missing much, though!
    pidgeontoes's picture

    Short on plot

    I have been enjoying this show - Mary's character is surprising and entertaining, and the episode with Dave Foley was particularly exciting.  But this Sunday's episode with the gambling was short on plot and long on cheesy cliches.  Very disappointing.

    Morgan's picture

    There is nothing plain about Mary McCormack!

    I have to strongly disagree.   Mary is complicated.  Sure she is pretty rough around the edges and even a bit mean and defensive, but that is part of what makes her character seem more real.  We all have our bad moments.  And it is not as if they are not emphasizing the fact that she is indeed pretty flawed and has some BIG issues to work out.

     The acting is good.  Great guest stars.  The writing is witty and fun.  Marshall is hilarious!  I have to say that I think the show is living up to my expectations.  It is a detective/law enforcement dramedy.  Take it for what it is.  And I think it is pretty good!

    the fallen's picture

    Cpmplicated

    is one way to put it. The problem is they make no real effort to work through or explain why she is the way she is. At this rate, they won't get a chance cause this is gonna be a single season show.
    mimi's picture

    I LOVE this show! Mary is

    I LOVE this show! Mary is complicated, flawed, rough, somewhat intolerant of being put out, but still able to find the humanity within. She's great at her job and sucks at relationships. WOW! What a novelty. Like we all haven't known a few people like that in our lives!

    This show is very well written for a procedural and the performances are excellent. She is the female version of so many flawed but likeable male characters we've seen over the years. It's nice to have one we can call our own.

    This ain't no Women's Murder Club. (Another show I enjoyed, but for different reasons) and the fact it isn't is why I like it.

    She isn't a cookie cutter female character for once. What a nice surprise!

    Nyssa's picture

    Not really watched it yet

    Tapped it , waiting to watch it, but my roommate got fired and is taking over TV.

    I do notice that her stance seems a little too forced, like I am a super hero ..

     

    We shall see.

     

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    the fallen's picture

    Reminds me of Bionic Woman

    in that I was really rooting for it, but gave up. It doesn't even have the redeeming quality of Katee Sackhoff to keep me trying. 
    Lisa's picture

    It's okay, but nothing special. Still...

    Still... when I find myself wanting more Marshall and less Mary, there's a problem with the show.

    And honestly?  If I want bitchy and complicated, Holly Hunter does it a lot better in Saving Grace.

    Meg's picture

    Add me to the list of

    Add me to the list of people who love the show! I think that it has steadily gotten better since the pilot which is always a good sign. I also have warmed up to mary's family as the series has gone on and think that Lesley Anne Warren does a fabulous job playing the mom...

    I would have to say that Marshall is probably my favorite character... He is hilarious and i love how he handles Mary. There's definitely some chemistry between them but im glad that they havent tried to put them together just yet..

    And yes, Mary is a "bitch" but she definitely has her soft moments and seems to really care about her witnesses.. I thought it was really touching in the last episode when she broke down at the gamblers meeting and also when the older brother started crying on her shoulder...

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    XenaGab2's picture

    How about Renee

    I think what Mary needs is a lesbian love interest.  Army Wives dropped the ball with Renee O'Connor portraying a lesbian on their show, I think, In Plain Sight should pick up the ball and run with it.  Renee should play a journalist who takes photos and does a story on a very high person in a drug cartel.  Mary has to spend a week with her, protecting her, until she can testify and get relocated.  In that week, they learn a lot about each other, and enjoy each others company so much more than they ever expected.  Mary starts to feel something she never thought possible.  Sound good so far.  I see a lot of drama, a lot of humor, a lot of emotion and maybe a little hugging.  Can anyone smell ratings hike!.  If anyone wants the whole story, I can write it.  Come on USA network, pick up the ball.  Call Renee!
    the linster's picture

    I like the way you think

    Pitch it, girl!
    Caitlin's picture

    IFrom what I've seen, it's good.

    I only saw the pilot and I liked it. I liked the partner and Lesley Ann Warren. It had a pretty good storyline and pretty much everyone played the part well. The little sister annoyed me though...

    I really need to start watching it again. It's a good show.

    Andrea's picture

    I just want to love it soooooo bad

    When I saw this show was coming out, I thought it looked great.  I think that Mary McCormack is sort of the tough, sexy type that works for me.  I liked the first few shows and had the intention of being with it every single week.  I have to say though that this past week I couldn't even watch the whole episode.  I am really let down by the whole thing, I am sure they could take it so much further if they tried.  It seems they have a decent bunch of actors and a good premise.  The only thing lacking is the writing and it needs to be fixed asap.  I will continue to give it a chance in the hope it will redeem itself as the episodes unfold...fingers crossed.
    the linster's picture

    Ya'll are cool

    I love that AfterEllen.com readers aren't cookie cutter lebsians. Thanks for the strong opinions on all sides!
    HotHandle's picture

    You gotta give the show a chance...

    All new shows need a chance to breathe and grow.  I like "In Plain Sight".  The premise is good, the writing is good, and Mary McCormack is developing an interesting, flawed character.  Sure, her family is screwed up (whose isn't?), she doesn't always do the right thing (who does?), but it is still fascinating to watch her do her thing.  WITSEC never had a better representative than this show.

     

    the linster's picture

    OK

    I watched the show Saturday – I guess it was a repeat of the most recent episode – and it was better than the other eps I've seen. Enough that I'll watch the next one. Hopefully, the show is finding its stride -- I'd love to see Mary Mc succeed!
    neigekins's picture

    Love it

    I absolutely love this show and wouldn't miss it. The season finale was exceptional.